Task 1 Revision Plan

   For the revision of my task one I plan to implement a different dynamic throughout the entirety of my paper in order to make the paper more focused to the central goal of the prompt. Obviously since I failed the paper I know that I pretty much need to improve on every required aspect of the paper. Specific elements that I need to put in this paper include, a better description of my community, a more specific research plan, clear research questions, better organization of the information I present, as well as a better description of the text that I plan to analyze.

   In order to improve the research plan of my task 1 paper I plan to do a variety of different things. First off, I will better describe the community I am talking about with in depth descriptions and specific examples of how they communicate online as well as how the postings and articles relate to my study on lexis. To address the research question issue I plan on using the exact research questions I formulated in my annotated bibliography and using them as the research questions for this task. Furthermore, to describe my community in more detail I will describe in full complete detail the specific text associated with the online bass fishing community, which was one of the many pitfalls of my paper. Finally to round out the newly revised copy, I will rearrange and better organize the information I am presenting so that things such as my research plan and community description can be better understood. Outside of messing up and pretty much completely missing the point of this assignment, when revisiting this paper I will also check for basic formatting issues with the header and font, as well as sentence structure and basic grammar.